Hi Evannah, I'm Hannah from Awahono School. I like your post that has lots of poems. Maybe You can fix up your spelling because I can't read what some of your words say. Maybe if you fix your spelling I might be able to read what that word is. I really like how you have make animals using shapes. From Hannah
Hi Evannah, Sophie here from Awahono School. I like how you have made your background white because then you can read the writing perfectly. My favourite drawing would have to be the dolphin. You really made it look realistic! My two favourite poems would have to be the yellow and ice and fire poem. What parts did William do? I like how you wrote hot coco in the ice and fire poem. It really gives me that warm feeling! Maybe next time you could do less slides. I love your banana background on the yellow poem! IT MAKES ME HUNGRY! Awesome work, Evannah!
Hi Evannah, Bella here from Awahono school,I like how you put on the 17th slide, a bat background. Next time maybe don't put on so meany slides because it was too long. I like how you put on the banana background and your banana poem. From Bella
Hi Evannah, I`am Annabelle from Awahono school. I like how you tried to make the animals that you are describing. Next time you could not show us the picture of the animal because it just gives the mystery away. I'am looking forward to seeing another comment on the same thing.
Hi Evannah I'm Troy from ahipara school. I like how you described the things really well, maybe a bit to much but It was still good. keep up the good work!
Hi Evannah, I'm Hannah from Awahono School. I like your post that has lots of poems. Maybe You can fix up your spelling because I can't read what some of your words say. Maybe if you fix your spelling I might be able to read what that word is. I really like how you have make animals using shapes. From Hannah
ReplyDeleteHi Evannah, Sophie here from Awahono School. I like how you have made your background white because then you can read the writing perfectly. My favourite drawing would have to be the dolphin. You really made it look realistic! My two favourite poems would have to be the yellow and ice and fire poem. What parts did William do? I like how you wrote hot coco in the ice and fire poem. It really gives me that warm feeling! Maybe next time you could do less slides. I love your banana background on the yellow poem! IT MAKES ME HUNGRY! Awesome work, Evannah!
ReplyDeletethak you and no williem did not do any of it at all.
ReplyDeleteshe only did the pink one
ReplyDeleteHi Evannah, Bella here from Awahono school,I like how you put on the 17th slide, a bat background. Next time maybe don't put on so meany slides because it was too long. I like how you put on the banana background and your banana poem.
ReplyDeleteFrom Bella
Hi Evannah, I`am Annabelle from Awahono school. I like how you tried to make the animals that you are describing. Next time you could not show us the picture of the animal because it just gives the mystery away. I'am looking forward to seeing another comment on the same thing.
ReplyDeleteHi Evannah I'm Troy from ahipara school. I like how you described the things really well, maybe a bit to much but It was still good.
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work!